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-## Take Action
+## Karibu Zanzibar
 
-### Be a Part of the Change
+### Join Us For a Visit
 
-Calling dreamers and doers. There are many ways to join in on the efforts to bring the OurParadise vision to life. Come to Zanzibar to collaborate in-person, buy EDEN (see below), or support from afar.
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-Please note **we are now primarily focused on raising $3M in order to fully acquire Mbweni Ruins and Jungle Paradise**. Today we are already operating from this location.
+Come one, come all. We'd be thrilled to have you. Join us as a guest, or contribute with your time and/or resources. 
 
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