From 769141efd739a971e8f9ed6e85ee44182c63a44b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Emre <emre@Emres-MacBook-Air.local>
Date: Thu, 6 Nov 2025 11:51:31 +0300
Subject: [PATCH] language fixes

---
 src/components/AboutExperience.tsx            |  2 +-
 src/components/AboutHero.tsx                  |  4 ++--
 src/components/AboutMission.tsx               | 11 ++++-----
 src/components/CallToAction.tsx               |  6 ++---
 src/components/Faqs.tsx                       |  2 +-
 src/components/Hero.tsx                       |  2 +-
 src/components/HomeAbout.tsx                  | 24 +++++++++----------
 src/components/PeopleHero.tsx                 |  3 +--
 src/components/VenturesHero.tsx               |  2 +-
 .../people/People_Sacha_Obeegadoo.tsx         |  2 +-
 10 files changed, 27 insertions(+), 31 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/components/AboutExperience.tsx b/src/components/AboutExperience.tsx
index 33fc82c..2dc6f30 100644
--- a/src/components/AboutExperience.tsx
+++ b/src/components/AboutExperience.tsx
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ export function AboutExperience() {
           </h2>
           <div className="mx-auto max-w-3xl mt-6">
           <p className="p-default text-gray-900">
-           Incubaid's approach was very IT-centric – focusing on storage, automation and cloud. During this wave from 2000 till 2015, some of those companies defined parts of the cloud landscape, and are still being used actively today.
+           Our initial approach was very IT-centric – focusing on storage, automation and cloud. During this wave from 2000 till 2015, some of those companies defined parts of the cloud landscape, and are still being used actively today.
           </p>
         </div>
         
diff --git a/src/components/AboutHero.tsx b/src/components/AboutHero.tsx
index cb2373a..b81084c 100644
--- a/src/components/AboutHero.tsx
+++ b/src/components/AboutHero.tsx
@@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ export function AboutHero() {
           <div className="text-center">
              <p className="subtitle text-black">ABOUT</p>
             <h1 className="h1-default text-gray-900">
-              Building the Future of Digital Autonomy
+              Building the Future of Digital Sovereignty
             </h1>
             <p className="mt-8 p-default text-gray-500">
-              OurWorld is more than a venture creator – we create and develop new businesses, typically in the form of startups. We don't just fund individual ventures – we actively shape the architecture of our unique ecosystem. Support includes providing funding, resources, and mentorship.
+              OurWorld creates and supports ventures that put sovereignty back in the hands of people and communities. Each venture in our ecosystem contributes to a future where individuals and organizations own their digital presence, data, and destiny.
             </p>
             <div className="mt-10 flex items-center justify-center gap-x-6">
               <Button href="/contact" color="black">
diff --git a/src/components/AboutMission.tsx b/src/components/AboutMission.tsx
index 102c1d3..d31c206 100644
--- a/src/components/AboutMission.tsx
+++ b/src/components/AboutMission.tsx
@@ -61,20 +61,17 @@ export function AboutMission() {
             <div className="text-base/7 text-gray-700 lg:max-w-xl">
               <p className="subtitle text-black">MISSION</p>
               <h2 className="mt-2 h2-default text-gray-900">
-                Let's Shape Our Future Together
+                Digital Sovereignty for All
               </h2>
               <div className="max-w-xl">
                 <p className="mt-6 p-default">
-                  OurWorld aims not just to do business, but to do good for the world while we're at it. We are an international team of experts and passionate believers in a better world who choose to act to make a difference.
+                  We believe access to compute, data ownership, and digital tools should be <strong>fundamental rights</strong> , not privileges granted by corporations.Our ventures create a parallel system where individuals and communities can achieve true digital sovereignty.
                 </p>
                 <p className="mt-8 p-default">
-                  This journey began with the creation of a new Internet infrastructure layer, a process that has taken over two decades – and was made possible by the contributions of thousands of people. Thank you to everyone who has made this possible.
+                  Our work spans decentralized internet infrastructure, sovereign data systems, legal structures for autonomy, and AI frameworks that amplify rather than replace human capability. The foundation was built over two decades developing decentralized internet infrastructure, made possible by thousands of contributors worldwide.
                 </p>
                 <p className="mt-8 p-default">
-                  Some of our co-founders have experience running Incubaid, a successful incubator focused primarily on helping to change our planet for the better through technology that supports decentralization.
-                </p>
-                <p className="mt-8 p-default">
-                  Now in this stage, we are focused on paving the way for Augmented Collective Intelligence, as described by Abhishek Gupta: emergent intelligence from the effective collaboration of human and machine agents to solve shared problems where the whole is greater than the sum of its parts.
+                  Now we're expanding that foundation into a full ecosystem where sovereignty isn't just technical, it's legal, financial, and accessible.
                 </p>
               </div>
             </div>
diff --git a/src/components/CallToAction.tsx b/src/components/CallToAction.tsx
index 33aa879..39c3da0 100644
--- a/src/components/CallToAction.tsx
+++ b/src/components/CallToAction.tsx
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ export function CallToAction() {
       <Container className="relative">
         <div className="mx-auto max-w-3xl text-center">
           <h2 className="h2-default text-white">
-            Launch Ventures That Shape the Future
+            Join the OurWorld Ecosystem
           </h2>
-          <p className="mt-4 text-lg tracking-tight text-white">
-            Partner with OurWorld to build infrastructure, AI, DeFi, education, and digital economy ventures; all backed by funding, mentorship, and mission-aligned infrastructure.
+          <p className="mt-4 text-lg tracking-tight text-white">  
+            Collaborate on ventures developing decentralized infrastructure, tools, and frameworks that make sovereign cloud and AI accessible to everyone.
           </p>
           <div className="mt-12 flex flex-col sm:flex-row gap-8 justify-center">
             <Button href="/contact" color="white">
diff --git a/src/components/Faqs.tsx b/src/components/Faqs.tsx
index e00c5b2..5622897 100644
--- a/src/components/Faqs.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Faqs.tsx
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ const faqs = [
     {
       question: 'What is the Digital Free Zone?',
       answer:
-        'It’s a sovereign digital jurisdiction with streamlined digital business operations enabling remote company creation, borderless commerce, and flexible digital residency.',
+        'It’s a sovereign digital jurisdiction with streamlined digital business operations, enabling remote company creation, borderless commerce, and flexible digital residency.',
     },
     {
       question: 'Where can I learn more or contact the team?',
diff --git a/src/components/Hero.tsx b/src/components/Hero.tsx
index 92aefed..b450566 100644
--- a/src/components/Hero.tsx
+++ b/src/components/Hero.tsx
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ export function Hero() {
         Shaping the future of Augmented Collective Intelligence
       </p>
       <p className="mx-auto mt-6 max-w-2xl text-lg lg:text-xl tracking-tight text-white/90">
-        At OurWorld, we are building the required infrastructures and tools to enable an Augmented Collective Intelligence ;  creating a fairer, decentralized, sustainable, and autonomous future for all.
+        At OurWorld, we are building the required infrastructures and tools to enable an Augmented Collective Intelligence ;  creating a sovereign, sustainable, and autonomous future for all.
       </p>
       <div className="mt-10 flex justify-center">
         <Button href="/about" color="white">Learn More</Button>
diff --git a/src/components/HomeAbout.tsx b/src/components/HomeAbout.tsx
index daf3a21..b900683 100644
--- a/src/components/HomeAbout.tsx
+++ b/src/components/HomeAbout.tsx
@@ -4,31 +4,31 @@ const features = [
   {
     name: 'A Funding Platform',
     description:
-      'Unlock unparalleled financial support for diverse, forward-thinking projects, focusing on cutting-edge technologies that benefit both the environment and society.',
+      'Access capital for projects building on decentralized infrastructure, with a focus on ventures that contribute to digital sovereignty for people and sustainable technology for the planet.',
     href: '#',
     icon: CircleStackIcon,
   },
   {
     name: 'Legal & Financial Autonomy',
     description:
-      'Experience true independence with our integrated system offering legal and financial freedom. Through innovative structures like free zones, we create a fertile ground for your business to flourish.',
+      'Operate through our free zone with optimized legal and financial structures designed for global teams. Startups benefit from transparent, innovation-friendly structures designed for streamlined borderless operations.',
     href: '#',
     icon: ScaleIcon,
-  },
-  {
-    name: 'Life Supporting Infrastructure',
-    description:
-      'Benefit from our holistic infrastructure that supports financial, educational- tailored to ensure that every startup within our venture ecosystem can thrive and grow sustainably.',
-    href: '#',
-    icon: ArrowPathIcon,
   },
     {
     name: 'Technological Empowerment',
     description:
-      'Harness the power of our advanced interconnected technological ecosystem, designed to grant individuals, communities, and countries complete digital autonomy.',
+      'Build on our interconnected stack of decentralized cloud infrastructure, sovereign data centers, and agentic AI frameworks, giving your startup the tools for complete digital autonomy.',
     href: '#',
     icon: RocketLaunchIcon,
   },
+  {
+    name: 'Collaborative Ecosystem',
+    description:
+      'Join a network of ventures building interconnected solutions for digital sovereignty. Share resources, infrastructure, and knowledge across projects working toward a decentralized future.',
+    href: '#',
+    icon: ArrowPathIcon,
+  },
 ]
 
 export function HomeAbout() {
@@ -70,12 +70,12 @@ export function HomeAbout() {
         <div className="mx-auto max-w-4xl lg:mx-0">
           <p className="subtitle text-white">ABOUT</p>
           <h2 className="mt-2 h2-default text-white">
-            Enabling an Interconnected Ecosystem to Enhance human Intelligence Through Collaboration.
+            Enabling an Interconnected Ecosystem to Enhance Collective Intelligence Through Collaboration.
           </h2>
         </div>
         <div className="lg:mx-0 max-w-2xl mt-6">
           <p className="p-default text-gray-300">
-            OurWorld is a venture creator, dedicated to empowering startups with the resources and support they need to revolutionize the future.
+            OurWorld is a venture creator providing startups with decentralized infrastructure, legal frameworks, and technological capacity to build without traditional constraints.
           </p>
         </div>
         <div className="mx-auto mt-16 max-w-2xl lg:mt-16 lg:max-w-none">
diff --git a/src/components/PeopleHero.tsx b/src/components/PeopleHero.tsx
index 8230204..c45e1b4 100644
--- a/src/components/PeopleHero.tsx
+++ b/src/components/PeopleHero.tsx
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@ export function PeopleHero() {
         <div className="mx-auto max-w-2xl lg:mx-0">
           <h2 className="text-4xl font-semibold tracking-tight text-pretty text-gray-900 sm:text-5xl">Our team</h2>
           <p className="mt-6 text-lg/8 text-gray-600">
-            We're a dynamic group of individuals who are passionate about what we do and dedicated to delivering the
-            best results for our startups.
+            We're a dynamic global team building the infrastructure and frameworks that enable true digital sovereignty for individuals and organizations.
           </p>
         </div>
         <ul
diff --git a/src/components/VenturesHero.tsx b/src/components/VenturesHero.tsx
index c69f339..9a91be7 100644
--- a/src/components/VenturesHero.tsx
+++ b/src/components/VenturesHero.tsx
@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ const ventures = [
 
 const heroContent = {
   title: 'OurWorld Ventures',
-  subtitle: 'These are the first OurWorld Ventures, connected by a strong set of values and the aim to bring forward a new era of digital autonomy and empowerment.',
+  subtitle: 'United by shared values, these ventures collectively build the infrastructure, frameworks, and tools needed for true digital autonomy.',
   backgroundImage: '/images/ventures/earth.jpg',
   backgroundAlt: 'Earth from space'
 }
diff --git a/src/components/people/People_Sacha_Obeegadoo.tsx b/src/components/people/People_Sacha_Obeegadoo.tsx
index 75baed5..2ca8fbe 100644
--- a/src/components/people/People_Sacha_Obeegadoo.tsx
+++ b/src/components/people/People_Sacha_Obeegadoo.tsx
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ const biography = `
     Sacha is a mission-driven strategist, storyteller, and connector working to accelerate the transition toward decentralised, inclusive, and regenerative systems. His journey has taken him across sectors and continents—building ecosystems, crafting narratives, and securing high-impact partnerships.
   </p>
   <p class="mt-5 text-lg/7">
-    As COO of Geomind, OurWorld's geospatial intelligence venture, Sacha leads business development across ventures, aligning purpose with traction. With a sharp sense for timing and strategy, he bridges founders, investors, and institutions—ensuring that each initiative is not only bold in vision but grounded in execution.
+    As COO of Geomind, OurWorld's capacity expansion venture, Sacha leads business development, aligning purpose with traction. With a sharp sense for timing and strategy, he bridges founders, investors, and institutions—ensuring that each initiative is not only bold in vision but grounded in execution.
   </p>
 `