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-## Zero-Stor : a quantum safe backend storage system.
+## Zero-Stor : A Quantum Safe Backend Storage System.
 
-### Why?
+### The Problem
 
 Traditional backend storage systems have their roots in centralized environments, focusing on low-latency and closed security setups. However, these characteristics make them less suitable for use in decentralized cloud contexts.
 
-Newer-generation storage systems like protocol-driven or blockchain-based solutions may face scalability and performance limitations and may not fulfill certain critical requirements that we consider essential.
+Newer generation storage systems such as protocol-driven or blockchain-based solutions may face scalability and performance limitations and may not fulfill certain critical requirements that we consider essential.
 
-### What?
+### Introducing Zero-Stor
 
-A redesigned storage system which can scale to planet level, is super secure private and fast enough for more usecases. Its designed to operate in a decentralized context. Data can never be lost of corrupted.
+A redesigned storage system which can scale to planet level. It is super secure, private and fast enough for more use cases. It is designed to operate in a decentralized context and data can never be lost or corrupted.
 
-This storage system is a backend storage system, cannot be used by end users, its meant to be integrated with a front end storage system like e.g. S3 or a filesystem (see next section).
+This storage system is:
+- A backend storage system
+- It cannot be used by end users
+- It's meant to be integrated with a front end storage system like e.g. S3 or a filesystem (see next section).
 
 
-### Benefits?
+### The Benefits
 
 
-- **Data Resilience:** Ensures data is never lost or corrupted.
-- **Planetary Scalability:** Capable of scaling to a global level.
-- **Cost-Efficient:** Offers exceptional cost efficiency.
-- **Versatility:** Suitable for various use cases, including archiving, backup, files, and CDNs.
-- **Low Overhead:** Requires only a 20% overhead for building a storage network where any four nodes can be lost simultaneously, compared to a 400% overhead in traditional storage systems.
-- **Security and Privacy:** Provides robust security, even impervious to quantum computers.
-- **Data Sovereignty:** Users have complete control over data placement.
-- **Empowering Front-End Applications:** Can be integrated into various front-end storage applications, such as blockchains, archives, or S3.
-- **CDN Support:** Functions effectively as a backend for CDN applications, facilitating content delivery.
-- **Sustainability:** Uses 10 times less energy compared to traditional storage systems, contributing to sustainability efforts.
-- **Locality Aware:** Data can be delivered to where the users are ideal for sovereign usecases.
+- **Data resilience:** ensures data is never lost or corrupted.
+- **Planetary scalability:** capable of scaling to a global level.
+- **Cost-efficient:** offers exceptional cost efficiency.
+- **Versatility:** suitable for various use cases, including archiving, backup, files, and CDNs.
+- **Low overhead:** requires only a 20% overhead for building a storage network where any four nodes can be lost simultaneously, compared to a 400% overhead in traditional storage systems.
+- **Security and privacy:** provides robust security and is even impervious to quantum computers.
+- **Data sovereignty:** users have complete control over data placement.
+- **Empowering front-end applications:** can be integrated into various front-end storage applications, such as blockchains, archives, or S3.
+- **CDN support:** functions effectively as a backend for CDN applications, facilitating content delivery.
+- **Sustainability:** uses 10 times less energy compared to traditional storage systems, contributing to sustainability efforts.
+- **Locality aware:** data can be delivered to where the users are which is ideal for sovereign use cases.
 
 
-### Status?
+### Status
 
 - Zero-OS has been in beta for over four years, with continuous development and improvement.
 - A notable deployment in Switzerland, with over 50 petabytes of storage capacity, served as a substantial test environment, although it's no longer active.
-- Within the current TFGrid network, there's an impressive capacity of over 20 petabytes available for use.
-- Lacking some monitoring, documentation ... will be added in TFGrid 3.15
+- Within the current TFGrid network, there is an impressive capacity of over 20 petabytes available for use.
+- Lacking some monitoring but documentation will be added in TFGrid 3.15
 - Previous releases have been successfully utilized by major government organizations on a massive scale (hundreds of petabytes), providing strong evidence of the concept's viability and effectiveness.