Merge pull request 'development_kristof_merge' (#51) from development_kristof_merge into development

Reviewed-on: #51

books/projectinca/SUMMARY.md

@@ -2,13 +2,11 @@
 - [Introduction](projectinca/intro.md)
 - [The Plan](projectinca/theplan_c.md)
   - [Funding](projectinca/funding.md)
-  - [P2P Promotion](projectinca/peer2peer_promotion.md)fl
+  - [P2P Promotion](projectinca/peer2peer_promotion.md)
   - [Liquidity](projectinca/liquidity.md)
-<<<<<<< HEAD
-- [Collaboration INCA Launch](projectinca/collab.md)
-=======
 - [INCA Tokenomics](projectinca/tokens.md)
   - [INCA](projectinca/inca.md)
+  - [TFT](projectinca/tft.md)
 - [INCA Grants](projectinca/grants.md)
   - [v3.x Grants](projectinca/grants_tft.md)
     - [Deploy AI Blocks](projectinca/grant_aiblock.md)
@@ -18,11 +16,12 @@
     - [Contributor Rewards](projectinca/contributor_rewards.md)
     - [Chapter Tanzania](projectinca/chapter_tanzania.md)
     - [Chapter Brazil](projectinca/chapter_brazil.md)
-    - [Biz dev rewards](projectinca/biz_dev_rewards.md)
+    - [Biz Dev Rewards](projectinca/biz_dev_rewards.md)
     - [Code TFGrid 3.13](projectinca/grant_tf_3_13.md)
     - [Code TFGrid 3.14](projectinca/grant_tf_3_14.md)
     - [Establish Thorchain DEX](projectinca/grant_thorchain.md)
   - [v4.x Grants](projectinca/grants_inca.md)
+  - [Grant Voting Process](projectinca/grant_voting_process.md)
 - [INCA Marketplace](projectinca/marketplace.md)
   - [Pricing](projectinca/marketplace_pricing.md)
   - [AI Blocks](tfgrid4/aiblock.md)
@@ -34,14 +33,10 @@
   - [INCA Network Map](projectinca/networkmap.md)
   - [Reward Simulation](projectinca/inca_farming_reward.md)
 - [INCA Launch Collaboration](projectinca/collab.md)
->>>>>>> ba303b6e3eb8220bf2851a949db109e68ccd1f8c
   - [Remuneration](projectinca/remuneration.md)
   - [Promotion Effort](tfgrid3/promotion.md)
   - [Messaging](tfgrid3/messaging.md)
   - [Teams](projectinca/teams.md)
-<<<<<<< HEAD
-- [Hero - Project Mycelium](projectinca/hero.md)
-=======
 - [INCA Grid Utilization](partners_utilization/partners.md)
   - [Hero - Project Mycelium](projectinca/hero.md)
   - [Digital Freezone](partners_utilization/freezone.md)
@@ -56,26 +51,12 @@
   - [Tier S Datacenter](partners_utilization/tier_s_datacenter.md)
 - [Engineering](projectinca/engineering.md)
   - [INCA Grid 4.0](projectinca/tfgrid4.md)
-  - [AI Blocks](tfgrid4/aiblock.md)
+- [Project Info](projectinca/project_info.md)
-  - [Cloud Blocks](tfgrid4/cloudblock.md)
-  - [Storage Blocks](tfgrid4/storageblock.md)
->>>>>>> ba303b6e3eb8220bf2851a949db109e68ccd1f8c
-- [Project Info](projectinca/proj_info.md)
   - [About Us](tfgrid3/who_are_we.md)
   - [The Internet Today](tech/internet_today.md)
-    - [History c64](tech/history/c64.md)
+    - [History of Computers](tech/history/c64.md)
     - [Too Many Layers](tech/history/layers.md)
   - [Values](values/planet_people_first.md)
-  - [TFGrid Utilization](partners_utilization/partners.md)
-    - [Digital Freezone](partners_utilization/freezone.md)
-    - [Tanzania Internet](partners_utilization/tanzania.md)
-    - [Elestio](partners_utilization/elestio.md)
-    - [Earth Wallet](partners_utilization/earth_wallet.md)
-    - [Holochain](partners_utilization/holochain.md)
-    - [Sikana](partners_utilization/sikana.md)
-    - [vindo](partners_utilization/vindo.md)
-    - [vverse](partners_utilization/vverse.md)
-    - [Tier S Datacenter](partners_utilization/tier_s_datacenter.md)
   - [Tech Key Innovations](tech/key_innovations_overview.md)
     - [Mycelium Network](tech/mycelium_innovation.md)
     - [Zero-OS](tech/zos_innovation.md)
@@ -92,22 +73,22 @@
     - [Countries Don't Have Their Internet](why/countries_no_internet.md)
     - [Human Right](why/internet_human_right.md)
     - [Social Warming](why/social_warming.md)
+- [INCA Cloud Core Capabilities](tech/features.md)
+  - [Compute](tech/compute.md)
+    - [Zero-OS](tech/zos.md)
+    - [Infrastructure As Code](tech/smartcontract_iac.md)
+    - [CoreX](tech/corex.md)
+  - [Storage](tech/qsss_home.md)
+    - [Quantum Safe Storage Algo](tech/qss_algorithm.md)
+    - [Zero Knowledge proof](tech/qss_zero_knowledge_proof.md)
+    - [NFT Storage](tech/nft_storage.md)
+    - [S3 Storage](tech/s3_interface)
+    - [File System](tech/qss_filesystem.md)
+  - [Network](tech/networking.md)
+    - [Mycelium](tech/mycelium.md)
+    - [Web Gateway](tech/webgw.md)
 - [Appendix](projectinca/appendix.md)
   - [TFConnect NG Spec](projectinca/tfconnect.md)
   - [Tokenomics TFGrid 3.14](tfgrid3/tokenomics.md)
     - [Farming Reward TFGrid 3](tfgrid3/farming_reward.md)
     - [Tokens Overview TFGrid 3](tfgrid3/tokens_overview.md)
-  - [TFGrid Core Capabilities](tech/features.md)
-    - [Compute](tech/compute.md)
-      - [Zero-OS](tech/zos.md)
-      - [Infrastructure As Code](tech/smartcontract_iac.md)
-      - [CoreX](tech/corex.md)
-    - [Storage](tech/qsss_home.md)
-      - [Quantum Safe Storage Algo](tech/qss_algorithm.md)
-      - [Zero Knowledge proof](tech/qss_zero_knowledge_proof.md)
-      - [NFT Storage](tech/nft_storage.md)
-      - [S3 Storage](tech/s3_interface)
-      - [File System](tech/qss_filesystem.md)
-    - [Network](tech/networking.md)
-      - [Mycelium](tech/mycelium.md)
-      - [Web Gateway](tech/webgw.md)

books/projectmycelium/SUMMARY.md

@@ -5,33 +5,33 @@
   - [Tokens](projectmycelium/tokens.md)
   - [Solana Launch](projectmycelium/solana.md)
 - [Mycelium Routers & Nodes](projectmycelium/farming.md)
-  - [TF Nodes](projectmycelium/mycelium_nodes.md)
+  - [Mycelium Nodes](projectmycelium/mycelium_nodes.md)
-  - [TF Routers](projectmycelium/mycelium_routers.md)
+  - [Mycelium Routers](projectmycelium/mycelium_routers.md)
   - [Network Map](projectinca/networkmap.md)
 - [Planet and People First Values](values/planet_people_first.md)
 - [Layers](projectmycelium/participants.md)
   - [Decentralized Cloud](bestkeptsecret/tfgrid_intro.md)
     - [ThreeFold Cloud Intro](bestkeptsecret/tf_architecture.md)
     - [ThreeFold Links](bestkeptsecret/references.md)
-  - [Hero Layer](projectmycelium/participants_todo.md)
+  - [Hero Layer](projectmycelium/hero_layer.md)
-  - [Mycelium Layer](projectmycelium/participants_todo.md)
+  - [Mycelium Layer](projectmycelium/mycelium_layer.md)
-  - [Transactional Layer](projectmycelium/participants_todo.md)
+  - [Transactional Layer](projectmycelium/transactional_layer.md)
-  - [Digital Freezone Layer](projectmycelium/participants_todo.md)
+  - [Digital Freezone Layer](projectmycelium/digital_freezone_layer.md)
-- [Appendix Internet/Cloud](projectmycelium/appendix.md)
+- [Appendix Internet and Cloud](projectmycelium/appendix.md)
   - [ThreeFold Cloud in Nutshell](tfgrid3/who_are_we.md)
-  - [Background: what is Internet](bestkeptsecret/concept.md)
+  - [Background: What is Internet](bestkeptsecret/concept.md)
-    - [Internet is Broken](tech/internet_today.md)
+    - [The Internet is Broken](tech/internet_today.md)
     - [Build Internet from Scratch](bestkeptsecret/we_have_all_needed.md)- 
   - [The Internet today](tech/internet_today.md)
-    - [history c64](tech/history/c64.md)
+    - [History of Computers](tech/history/c64.md)
-    - [too many layers](tech/history/layers.md)
+    - [Too Many Layers](tech/history/layers.md)
   - [Why New Internet](why/why.md)   
     - [Cloud Too Centralized](why/current_cloud_too_centralized.md)
-    - [Countries don't have their Internet](why/countries_no_internet.md)
+    - [Countries Don't Have Their Own Internet](why/countries_no_internet.md)
     - [Human Right](why/internet_human_right.md)
     - [Social Warming](why/social_warming.md)
   - [Solutions to Problems](problems/problems.md)
-    - [painkillers and onions](problems/no_pain_killer.md)
+    - [Painkillers and Onions](problems/no_pain_killer.md)
     - [Clouds are Complicated](problems/cd_issues_cloud_not_enough.md)
     - [Content Delivery is Expensive](solutions/cdn_cost.md)
 - [Governance](projectmycelium/governance.md)

collections/projectinca/collab.md

@@ -4,5 +4,5 @@
 
 Let's all together work together on this document as well as on the stories which make up our planning.
 
-- [info_tfgrid = markdown docs for this wiki](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/info_tfgrid/src/branch/main/collections)
+- [Git repo for this manual](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/info_tfgrid)
-- [stories, contributors only, ask access](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/depin_circle/issues)
+- [Stories for contributors only (Ask access)](https://git.ourworld.tf/tfgrid/depin_circle/issues)

collections/projectinca/engineering/engineering.md

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
 # Engineering
 
-> TODO: specify more
+This section presents the engineering aspect of the project.

collections/projectinca/farming/inca_farming.md

@@ -2,12 +2,12 @@
 
 ## INCA Farming = **Become a Cloud Service Provider**
 
-Farming means a person or company offers compute, storage and network capacity to the network
+The process of farming consists of a person or a company offering compute, storage and network capacity to the network.
 
-- Farmers buy a INCA Node
+- Farmers buy INCA Nodes
-- A farmer connects the INCA Node(s) to internet and get rewards for providing capacity
+- They connect the INCA Nodes to internet and get rewards for providing capacity
-- A farmer earns rewards mainly for utilization but there are also lots of rewards available for providing capacity.
+- Farmers earn rewards mainly for utilization, but there are also lots of rewards available for providing capacity.
-- A farmer is helping his/her community to get access to sovereign Internet & Cloud applications on an unbreakabale co-owned Internet/Cloud.
+- Farmers help their community to get access to sovereign Internet and cloud applications on an unbreakabale and co-owned Internet and cloud.
 
 ### Income for the Farmers: Mainly Based on Utilization
 
@@ -22,36 +22,37 @@ The recommended pricing is:
 - $0.005-4 for Cloud Block Capacity  (VM, Containers, Kubernetes, ...) (per hour)
 - $0.2-2 for Storage Box (100 GB of storage) (per month)
 
-- ** farmers can also make money with other services e.g.
+- Farmers can also make money with other services e.g.
   - $0.01-0.2 for 1000 messages over LoraWAN (long range wifi)
 
-> 80% of these fees goes to farmer, 20% to the *TFCOOP, exception for a twin which is 50-50% split.
+> 80% of these fees goes to farmer, 20% to the *TFCOOP, exception for a twin which is split 50-50%.
 
 ### Farming Boosters = Additional Rewards for Providing Capacity
 
-Our aim is to have millions of nodes in the field to evingly create the biggest network of Cloud & Internet Capacity in the world.
+Our aim is to have millions of nodes in the field to eventually create the biggest network of Cloud & Internet Capacity in the world.
 
-There are Farming Boosters (additional rewards) available for supporting special locations, providing more uptime & SLA's, ...
+There are Farming Boosters (additional rewards) available for supporting special locations, providing more uptime & SLA's, etc.
 
-Cell's get colors in line to need of service:
+Cells get colorized in line with the service needed:
 
-- green (enough nodes, no rewards)
+- Green (enough nodes, no rewards)
-- yellow (can use some extra nodes)
+- Yellow (can use some extra nodes)
-- red (let's do it, this region needs help)
+- Red (let's do it, this region needs help)
 
-For red cells the additional farming booster reward is highest.
+For red cells, the additional farming booster reward is the highest.
 
 
 ### How to Become a Farmer
 
-- buy a *INCA NODE (Compute/Storage/AI node) or *INCA ROUTER (Mycelium Network Node).
+- Buy a *INCA NODE (Compute/Storage/AI node) or *INCA ROUTER (Mycelium Network Node).
-- or assemble your own Node, our software makes it easy to get started (see threefold.io for version 3).
+- Assemble your own node
+  - Our software makes it easy to get started. Check [ThreeFold](https://threefold.io/) v3 for more info.
 
 ### Rewards for Being a Farmer
 
-Typically a Farmer can earn the investment of their node back 2 to 10 times over 5 years if succesful.
+Typically a Farmer can earn the investment of their node back 2 to 10 times over 5 years if successful.
 
-> For a [simulation](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1D6Q3Yav_SS356zAILwN4SrmqwYfLibT3E6oWrVPU4c8/edit#gid=170998100)
+> For a simulation, [consult this document](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1D6Q3Yav_SS356zAILwN4SrmqwYfLibT3E6oWrVPU4c8/edit#gid=170998100).
 
 ### Farming Pools
 
@@ -59,22 +60,21 @@ Some farmers will chose not to manage, market or operate their 3node, in that ca
 
 A Farming pool takes care of
 
-- marketing the capacity
+- Marketing the capacity
-- giving support to the userbase (developers)
+- Giving support to the userbase (developers)
-- managing the best possible pricing
+- Managing the best possible pricing
-- monitor all nodes and optimize uptime
+- Monitor all nodes and optimize uptime
-- monitor available bandwidth and make optimizations where possible.
+- Monitor available bandwidth and make optimizations where possible
-
-If a farmer uses a farming pool he/she will have to give a part of their reward to the farming pool, each farming pool can decide how much that needs to be.
 
+If a farmer uses a farming pool, they will have to give a part of their reward to the farming pool, each farming pool can decide how much that needs to be.
 
 ## Remarks
 
 ### Network Rewards requires Unblocked Incoming Internet.
 
-"Incoming internet traffic should be enabled to earn rewards from network bandwidth.
+Incoming Internet traffic should be enabled to earn rewards from network bandwidth.
 
-If a farmer lacks this capability, their INCA Node will connect to a neighboring INCA Node with good internet connectivity and public incoming access. In this case, the neighbor farmer will earn money from the internet traffic, while the farmer will continue to earn rewards for compute and storage."
+If a farmer lacks this capability, their INCA Node will connect to a neighboring INCA Node with good internet connectivity and public incoming access. In this case, the neighbor farmer will earn money from the Internet traffic, while the farmer will continue to earn rewards for compute and storage."
 
 All traffic is end2end encrypted over the Mycelium network = our P2P Network which lives on top of current Internet.
 

collections/projectinca/farming/inca_farming_reward.md

@@ -1,8 +1,5 @@
 # Farming Reward Calculation
 
-We have created a simulation sheet which allows you to estimate farming rewards based on utilization:
+We have created a [simulation sheet](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1D6Q3Yav_SS356zAILwN4SrmqwYfLibT3E6oWrVPU4c8/edit#gid=170998100) which allows you to estimate farming rewards based on utilization.
 
-For a [simulation](https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1D6Q3Yav_SS356zAILwN4SrmqwYfLibT3E6oWrVPU4c8/edit#gid=170998100)
+> Note: There are other rewards in relation to uptime, performance and location. Your reward might be much higher compared to utilization only.
-
-
-> Do note, there are other rewards in relation to uptime, performance & location, you're reward might be much higher compared to utilization only.

collections/projectinca/farming/inca_nodes.md

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 - 512 GB SSD
 - min 4 logical CPU cores
 
-Will cost less than 500 USD.
+It will cost less than 500 USD.
 
 ### INCA Node Gold
 
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ Will cost less than 500 USD.
 - min 8 logical CPU cores
 
 
-Will cost less than 1000 USD.
+It will cost less than 1000 USD.
 
 ### INCA Node Platinum
 
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Will cost less than 1000 USD.
 - min 16 logical CPU cores
 
 
-Will cost less than 1800 USD.
+It will cost less than 1800 USD.
 
 ### INCA Node Datacenter
 

collections/projectinca/farming/inca_routers.md

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 
 ## INCA Routers
 
-The INCA Routers allow everyone to connect the users of our network with the INCA Node
+The INCA Routers allow everyone to connect the users of our network with the INCA Node.
 
 ### INCA Router Indoor
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ This INCA Router is super fast and has lots of connectivity.
 
 ![](img/TFRouter_2b.png)
 
-> This INCA Router can be bought right now.
+> Purchasing this INCA router is currently possible.
 
 ### INCA Router Outdoor + Long Range
 
@@ -40,14 +40,10 @@ Currently, we rely on fiber or existing internet connections to link between loc
 
 ![](img/TFRouter_lr.png)
 
-> We are looking for volunteers who will be rewarded to do reasearch and experiment with chosen equipment to test performance in real life situations, let us know if interest to help.
+> We are looking for volunteers who will be rewarded to do reasearch and experiment with chosen equipment to test performance in real life situations, let us know if you want to collaborate.
-
-
-
 
 ## Lo-RAN
 
 ![](img/loran.png)
 
-
+<!-- !!task.add story:'TFRouter_selection' title:'describe loran on INCA Router' -->
-!!task.add story:'TFRouter_selection' title:'describe loran on INCA Router'

collections/projectinca/farming/networkmap.md

@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 # Network Map
 
+We are planning on creating a network map to visualize all INCA nodes, routers and also devices from partners.
+
 ![](img/networkmap.png)
 
-Above network map is from Helium see [the Helium Explorer](https://explorer.helium.com/) but we aim to have a similar map to visualize all INCA nodes and routers and also devices from partners.
+The Aaove network map is from Helium. See [the Helium Explorer](https://explorer.helium.com/) for inspiration.
-
-
 

collections/projectinca/funding.md

@@ -3,11 +3,11 @@
 
 # Funding INCA-G
 
-Funding INCA-G needs to be explored further. Selling INCA-G NFT tokens through entities such as SwissBorg might be good option.
+Funding INCA-G needs to be explored further. Selling INCA-G NFT tokens through entities such as SwissBorg might be a good option.
 
 # Funding Through Project Mycelium (HERO)
 
-There will be a new project called Project Mycelium. This project will be focused on the Hero super-tool. This will run on multiple clouds and we will also publish our own cloud versions.
+There will be a new project called Project Mycelium. This project will be focused on the Hero AI assistant and tool. This will run on multiple clouds and we will also publish our own cloud versions.
 
 The first narrative version can be found [in this doc](https://docs.google.com/document/d/1H24yGqXi3pX9xljTviFPS9tI4hX1r6cSB3hBa0BTtCI). This project aims to fundraise +40m EUR and will also buy TFT. See the section about deploying 100,000 HERO's to have an overview of the demand for grid resources this project would generate.
 

collections/projectinca/grants/grant_versions.md

@@ -1,4 +1,6 @@
-We believe in the power of grants to together with the community build the necessary components or reward the community to further develop the project.
+We believe in the power of grants to build together the necessary components or reward the community to further develop the project.
 
-- 1,2,3.X series are called TFGrid and can be followed on www.threefold.io
+- 1,2,3.X series are called TFGrid
-- 4.x series called INCA (INternet CApacity), tbd website
+  - The website is www.threefold.io
+- 4.x series called INCA (INternet CApacity)
+  - The website will be released soon

collections/projectinca/grants/grant_voting_process.md

@@ -1,17 +1,24 @@
-## Voting Process
+## Grant Voting Process
 
 The voting process is as follows:
 
 - Go to INCA Connect
 - See the projects
-- Vote + or -
+- Vote yes or no for a given project
 - Vote requests for projects need to be live for a minimum of 2 weeks
-- Votes are not free min 5 USD, but preferred 10 or more, the proceeds of votes go back to treasury
+- Votes are not free
+  - Minimum 5 USD, but preferred 10 or more
+  - The proceeds of votes go back to the treasury
 - Each project defines
-  - min nr of votes, voting fee, if dedicated account, proper description, vesting scheme
+  - Minimum number of votes
-- Everyone can see the projects on https://projectinca.info/projects and comment if logged in and accepted as commenter or moderator
+  - Voting fee
-- We need simple majority to have positive vote
+  - If dedicated account
-- Once positive vote the money goes in account created per project, there can be vesting on it, with acceleration
+  - Proper description
+  - Vesting scheme
+- Everyone can see the projects on the [Project INCA Projects website](https://projectinca.info/projects) and comment if logged in and accepted as commenter or moderator
+- We need simple majority to have a positive vote
+- Once we have a positive vote, the money goes in the account created for the project
+  - There can be vesting on it, with acceleration, etc.
 - Supported chains
   - We start by supporting Stellar
   - Then we will also support Solana

collections/projectinca/grants/grants_inca.md

@@ -44,5 +44,3 @@ option = {
 ## TFT Grants Treasury
 
 - **660,000,000 INCA is available for Grants (over all releases)**
-  
-!!wiki.include page:'projectinca:grant_voting_process.md'

collections/projectinca/grants/grants_tft.md

@@ -1,7 +1,5 @@
 # TFGrid 3.x Grants
 
-!!wiki.include page:'projectinca:grant_versions.md'
-
 Below you can find the grants as are open and being executed on for the 3.x version of our project.
 
 ```echarts
@@ -46,17 +44,17 @@ option = {
 
 ## TFT Grants Treasury
 
-- At least 180,000,000 TFT (which si 360,000,000 INCA) is available for Grants
+- At least 180,000,000 TFT (which could be converted to 360,000,000 INCA) is available for grants
-  - projects defined below 
+  - Projects defined below 
-    - in future on https://projectinca.info/projects  (To Be Done, link not working yet)
+    - Will be available in the future on https://projectinca.info/projects
-  - voting through INCA Connect
+  - Voting through INCA Connect
-- <10m  in locked pool (dead wallets)
+- <10m in locked pool (dead wallets)
   
 ## Reward Projects
 
 Initial projects are listed below.
 
-> Remark: all TFT are with vesting and have min execution price 0.1 USD per TFT or higher !
+> Remark: all TFT are with vesting and have min execution price 0.1 USD per TFT or higher!
 
 - [Deploy AI Blocks](projectinca/grant_aiblock.md) : 10m TFT
 - [Deploy Cloud Blocks](projectinca/grant_cloudblock.md) : 15m TFT
@@ -69,5 +67,3 @@ Initial projects are listed below.
 - [Code TFGrid 3.13](projectinca/grant_tf_3_13.md) : 10m TFT
 - [Code TFGrid 3.14](projectinca/grant_tf_3_14.md) : 5m TFT
 - [Establish Thorchain DEX](projectinca/grant_thorchain.md) : 5m TFT
-
-!!wiki.include page:'projectinca:grant_voting_process.md'

collections/projectinca/liquidity/liquidity.md

@@ -1,7 +1,6 @@
 
 ![](cloud_computing_with_liquidity_of_water_flow_aspect_19_12.png)
 
-
 # Liquidity
 
 ## Solana
@@ -14,15 +13,16 @@ We will partner with many DEX'es and make our token available where possible.
 
 ## THORChain
 
-THORCHain is an amazing platform, with super nice DEX. We need to find some cash to launch us on this chain.
+THORCHain is an amazing platform, with a super nice decentralized exchange (DEX). We need to find some cash to launch the project on this chain.
 
 ## LiquidCrypto
 
-See [https://liquidcrypto.finance/](https://liquidcrypto.finance/)
+See the [liquidCrypto](https://liquidcrypto.finance/) website.
 
-- A very nice platform, we can even whitelabel if that would be required.
+- A very nice platform
+  - We can even whitelabel if that would be required
 - Works on many blockchain platforms and is very well integrated with many DEXes
-- There will be an INCA liquidity pool, which can have parameters as defined by us.
+- There will be an INCA liquidity pool, which can have parameters as defined by us
     - This liquidity pool can be accessed from multiple blockchains e.g. Solana, Stellar, Ethereum-based chains
 
 ## Stellar (History)

collections/projectinca/marketplace/marketplace.md

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 
 We have reached a sizeable grid and want to promote commercialization.
 
-- We are introducing a market place and our next generation grid v4.0 (INCA).
+- We are introducing a market place and our next generation grid v4.0 (INCA)
-- This will make it a lot more easy for 3rd parties to use our infrastructure.
+- This will make it a lot more easy for 3rd parties to use our infrastructure
-- The currency as used on the marketplace is INCA, there will be a bridge between TFT and INCA.
+- The currency as used on the marketplace is INCA, there will be a bridge between TFT and INCA
 
 ## Benefits
 
@@ -13,13 +13,11 @@ We have reached a sizeable grid and want to promote commercialization.
 - Easier for users to find right priced service
 - Easier to monitor and enforce SLA's
 - Easier to track utilization and expansion
-- Can and will be extended to other Internet/Cloud Services
+- Can and will be extended to other Internet/cloud Services
 
-## More info about our cloud & Storage Blocks.
+## More info about our cloud & storage blocks
 
-- [Cloud Blocks](tfgrid4:cloudblock.md)
+Read the next sections for more information on the block concept.
-- [AI Blocks](tfgrid4:aiblock.md)
-- [Storage Blocks](tfgrid4:storageblock.md)
 
 !!wiki.include page:'marketplace_pricing0.md'
 

collections/projectinca/marketplace/marketplace_pricing0.md

@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@
-
 ### Possible Marketplace Pricing
 
 Each farmer can decide on their own price but between the min and max as specified below.
 
-
 ![](img/marketplace_pricing.png)
 
-As a consumer you have the capability to look for the Blocks which are of interest to you in relation to its properties like SLA, location, price, reputation, ...
+As a consumer you have the capability to look for the blocks which are of interest to you in relation to its properties like SLA, location, price, reputation, etc.
-
 

collections/projectinca/peer2peer_promotion.md

@@ -8,9 +8,9 @@ We believe the rollout must be viral. Here's how to achieve this.
 
 ### Expansion Rewards our TF Scouts:
 
-We expect the TF Scout to help newcomers to get onboarded. 
+We expect the TF Scouts to help newcomers to get onboarded. 
 
-We expect the TF Scout to do the following:
+We expect the TF Scouts to do the following:
 
 - Make sure the person knows about TF and understands its purpose & goal
 - Instruct what INCA is and what we can do with it

collections/projectinca/proj_info.md

@@ -1,5 +0,0 @@
-![alt text](theplan.png)
-
-# Project Info
-
-This section lists lots of info in relation to the why, what, etc.

collections/projectinca/project_info.md

@@ -0,0 +1,5 @@
+![alt text](theplan.png)
+
+# Project Info
+
+In this section, we provide general information on the project.

collections/projectinca/tokens/inca.md

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ There can never be more than 4 Billion INCA.
 - 50% of supply for Farming
   - People expanding the network with Router & Node capacity over the multiple releases
 - 16.5% Million for community grants
-  - we want to expand and build our project in first place together with the community
+  - We want to expand and build our project in first place together with the community
 - 1.3% Million for community expansion specifically for INCA
   - Promotion of the TFGrid
 - 3.3% For liquidity providing (DEX, marketmakers, ...)
@@ -67,4 +67,4 @@ The following table shows planned release, some of the mechanisms and details ar
 <!-- *Accelerated Vesting means: if INCA gets above 0.5 CHF per INCA (50%), the vesting accelerates in proportion to the percentage (e.g. 0.6 CHF per INCA = 60$ acceleration). At 1 CHF per INCA (100%) and more, the acceleration is 100%.* -->
 
 
-For more information about our gen3 token see [here called TFT](tft.md)
+For more information about our gen3 token see [here](tft.md).

collections/projectinca/tokens/tft.md

@@ -1,10 +1,10 @@
-## TFT main stats
+## TFT Main Stats
 
-TFT is the token on stellar as was used on our previous grids (v 1,2,3)
+TFT is the token on Stellar as was used on our previous grids (v 1,2,3).
 
 - **The TFT is our Creator Token, it has established and proven the technology**
-- Right now about 5 million TFT are farmed (mined) per month.
+- Right now about 5 million TFT are farmed (mined) per month
-- About 294,000,000 TFT have been farmed so far.
+- About 294,000,000 TFT have been farmed so far
 - Farming of TFT will stop at 1 Billion TFT
 
 
@@ -45,10 +45,10 @@ option = {
 - Rivine-minted TFT: 112,862,249
 - Stellar-minted TFT: 181,262,054
 
-### On v3.x of our Grid TFT Farming limited to 1 Billion
+### On v3.x of our Grid TFT Farming is limited to 1 Billion
 
-- Farming on TFGrid (our v3 release), stops at 1 Billion.
+- Farming on TFGrid (our v3 release) stops at 1 Billion.
-- Farming continues (over v4 release), total will be 50% of the total supply (1,2,3 and 4 release)
+- Farming continues (over v4 release) total will be 50% of the total supply (1,2,3 and 4 release)
 
 *The values above are estimate in some cases as we don't have full visibility and details for all wallets, but of course the totals are correct.*
 

collections/projectmycelium/farming/farming.md

@@ -1,48 +1,46 @@
+# Become a Hero Host
 
+You can become a Hero host by deploying Mycelium nodes and/or routers.
 
-## Become a Hero Host
+- As a host, you connect the router(s) and/or node(s) to internet and get rewards for providing compute, AI and network capacity. By doing this, you are helping your community to provide capacity to the network.
 
-> Deploy Mycelium Nodes or Routers
+## Income for the Hosts
 
-- as host you connect the router(s) and/or node(s) to internet and get rewards for providing compute, AI and network capacity
+Our aim is to have millions of routers and nodes in the field. Via our Network Map, we will map where cells displaying information on the the necessity to deploy more routers and/or nodes.
-- as host you earn rewards.
-- as host you are helping your community to provide capacity
 
-### Income for the Hosts
+The cells will show urgency via its colorzied code.
 
-Our aim is to have millions of routers and nodes in the field, we will have a map where cells will show the necessety to deploy more routers and/or nodes.
+- Green (enough nodes, no rewards)
+- Yellow (can use some extra nodes)
+- Red (let's do it, this region needs help)
 
-The collors will show urgency.
+For red cells the reward is the highest.
 
-- green (enough nodes, no rewards)
+## A Whole Ecosystem
-- yellow (can use some extra nodes)
-- red (let's do it, this region needs help)
 
-For red cells the reward is highest.
+We are also hosting on other networks like ThreeFold which is using the same underlying tech. This means that the ThreeFold Grid and the Mycelium network can co-exist and build on each other.
 
-We are also hosting on other networks like ThreeFold which is using the same underlying tech.
+## How to Become a Host
 
+Becoming a Mycelium host is highly accessible.
 
-### How to become a Host
+- Buy a *NODE (Compute/Storage node) or a *ROUTER (Mycelium Network Node).
+- Connect it to the Internet
+- Become part of a Hosting Pool
 
-- buy a *NODE (Compute/Storage node) or *ROUTER (Mycelium Network Node).
+## Hosting Rewards
-- connect to the internet
-- become part of a Hosting Pool
 
-### Rewards for being a Host
+Typically a host can earn the investment of their node back 2 to 5 times over 5 years if successful. This is not a financial advice and we recommend anyone to do their own research before proceeding in any project of the sort.
 
-Typically a Host can earn the investment of their node back 2 to 5 times over 5 years if succesful.
+## Hosting Pool
 
-### Hosting Pool
+A Hosting pool takes care of many things.
 
-A Hosting pool takes care of
+- Marketing the capacity and capabilities
-
+- Giving support to the userbase (developers)
-- marketing the capacity and capabilities
+- Managing the best possible pricing
-- giving support to the userbase (developers)
+- Monitor all nodes, routers and optimize uptime
-- managing the best possible pricing
+- Monitor available bandwidth and make optimizations where possible.
-- monitor all nodes, routers and optimize uptime
-- monitor available bandwidth and make optimizations where possible.
-
-If a Host uses a Hosting Pool he/she will have to give a part of their reward to the hosting pool, each hosting pool can decide how much that needs to be.
 
+If a host uses a Hosting Pool, they will have to give a part of their reward to the hosting pool. Each hosting pool can decide how much that needs to be and hosts will be invited to select the hosting pool that most fits their needs.
 

collections/projectmycelium/farming/mycelium_nodes.md

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 - 512 GB SSD
 - min 4 logical CPU cores
 
-Will cost less than 500 USD.
+It will cost less than 500 USD.
 
 ## Gold
 
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ Will cost less than 500 USD.
 - 1000 GB SSD
 - min 8 logical CPU cores
 
-Will cost less than 1000 USD.
+It will cost less than 1000 USD.
 
 ## Platinum
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ Will cost less than 1000 USD.
 - 4000 GB HDD
 - min 16 logical CPU cores
 
-Will cost less than 1800 USD.
+It will cost less than 1800 USD.
 
 ## Remarks
 

collections/projectmycelium/farming/mycelium_routers.md

@@ -7,20 +7,20 @@ The Mycelium Routers allow everyone to connect the users of our network with eac
 
 We are partnering with WiFi device vendors to extend the Mycelium Network in a full peer-to-peer fashion.
 
-WiFi 6 is now a reality and a native capacity from our first chosen node. The TFRouter Indoor can be purchased starting now. 
+WiFi 6 is now a reality and a native capacity from our first chosen node. The Mycelium Router Indoor can be purchased starting now. 
 
 It's an exciting node with a reasonable price point and enough CPU capacity to run the Mycelium Network stack within the node itself.
 
-More than 1 node can be installed in a larger office, hotel, home, etc., and they will automatically mesh together.
+More than one node can be installed in a larger office, hotel, home, etc., and they will automatically mesh together.
 
 ![](tfrouter_physical.png)
 
 
 ### Mycelium Router Edge
 
-The TFRouter Edge is a powerhouse, equipped with a strong CPU and lots of memory to run edge network functions. This router can be connected to multiple uplinks (satellite, cable, fiber, 5G), ...
+The Mycelium Router Edge is a powerhouse, equipped with a strong CPU and lots of memory to run edge network functions. This router can be connected to multiple uplinks (satellite, cable, fiber, 5G, etc.).
 
-Mycelium ensures that the shortest and fastest path is always used, and all communication is end-to-end encrypted between an TFRouter or even your mobile or computer if you have the Mycelium agent installed.
+Mycelium ensures that the shortest and fastest path is always used, and all communication is end-to-end encrypted between an Mycelium Router or even your mobile or computer if you have the Mycelium agent installed.
 
 ![](img/TFRouter_2.png)
 
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ This Router is super fast and has lots of connectivity.
 
 > This Router can be bought right now.
 
-### TFRouter Outdoor + Long Range
+### Mycelium Router Outdoor + Long Range
 
 We are in the process of selecting the appropriate network equipment to bridge between two locations and enable the creation of meshed wireless networks at the lowest cost.
 

collections/projectmycelium/governance.md

@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
 # Governance
 
-> to be completed
+This section provides the essential information concerning the Project Mycelium governance.
-

collections/projectmycelium/intro.md

@@ -2,8 +2,14 @@
 
 # Project Mycelium
 
-> TODO: intro text
+The Project Mycelium aims at building a conscious collective intelligence by enabling everyone to become the center of their own digital world.
+
+We want to redefine how to create and deploy on the Internet by means of a personal intelligent digital alter ego which allows us to create a collective intelligence.
+
+This project will supercharge our digital life, where we all have the opportunity to learn, partake and succeed with unlimited access to all digital tools required.
 
 ## Why
 
-> [Toward a Collective Conscious Intelligence](https://info.ourworld.tf/hero4d)
+There is an urgent need for a cloud and AI infrastructure upgrade.
+
+We need local infrastructure that ensures data locality and security. We need to have complete control over our own data. This data also needs to be close to us and unbreakable. There is a need to decentralize the data. Our system allows to disperse the data and workloads to avoid centralization and increase security. We need further security in the IT world. Our project proposes multi-layered security architectures to keep communication, data and compute safe.

collections/projectmycelium/participants.md

@@ -1,21 +1,22 @@
-# Ecosystem
+# An Ecosystem to Thrive
 
 ![alt text](participants.png)
 
-The following parties or solutions make up our ecosystem
+The following parties or solutions make up our ecosystem:
 
 - Hero (our own product)
 - Digital FreeZone
-  - possibility to attach a sovereign personal company to our hero
+  - Possibility to attach a sovereign personal company to our hero
 - Mycelium Routers & Nodes (our own way how to provide capacity)
-- ThreeFold
+- [ThreeFold](https://threefold.io/)
-  - a decentralized grid we want to work with to have access to more capacity
+  - A decentralized grid we want to work with to have access to more capacity
-  - uses simular tech as Mycelium Routers & Nodes
+  - Uses simular tech as Mycelium Routers & Nodes
 - HoloChain
-  - very close partner we are working with for a future of mutual credit currencies
+  - Very close partner we are working with for a future of mutual credit currencies
 - RainLanguage
-  - an amazing language for doing decentralized DEX orders, and provide liquidity
+  - An amazing language for doing decentralized DEX orders, and provide liquidity
 - Solana
-  - the most scalable blockchain today, the std for the DePIN world
+  - The most scalable blockchain today
+  - The standard for the DePIN world
 
 

collections/projectmycelium/participants/digital_freezone_layer.md

@@ -0,0 +1,3 @@
+# Digital Freezone Layer
+
+The Digital Freezone layer of the Project Mycelium will provide many possibilities for its users, e.g. the possibility to attach a sovereign personal company to a Hero key.

collections/projectmycelium/participants/hero_layer.md

@@ -0,0 +1,3 @@
+# Hero Layer
+
+The Hero layer of the Project Mycelium consists of a highly versatile and secure AI assistant and much more.

collections/projectmycelium/participants/mycelium_layer.md

@@ -0,0 +1,3 @@
+# Mycelium Layer
+
+The Mycelium layer of the Project Mycelium consists of the innovative Mycelium Network, an end-to-end encrypted IPv6 overlay network.

collections/projectmycelium/participants/transactional_layer.md

@@ -0,0 +1,3 @@
+# Transactional Layer
+
+The Transactional layer of the Project Mycelium will provide the needed layer to do transactions within the whole Project Mycelium ecosystem.

collections/projectmycelium/presentations/product_slides.md

@@ -1,6 +1,8 @@
 
 ![](img/prodslides.png)
 
-# Hero
+# Our Hero Journey
 
-The [Following Slides](https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1pB1ILqKnLMsjpkYRjIdAWY3mxgO6qJiExavNbAf6DWw/edit#slide=id.g2cfd347b7cd_0_994) present the product vision of our hero on top of the Mycelium Network.
+We prepared the following presentation to provide an overview of the [Project Mycelium](https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1pB1ILqKnLMsjpkYRjIdAWY3mxgO6qJiExavNbAf6DWw/edit#slide=id.g2cfd347b7cd_0_994).
+
+In this presentation, we present the Hero personal AI assistant. Hero is possible thanks to the network Mycelium we built.

collections/projectmycelium/solana.md

@@ -2,6 +2,8 @@
 
 ## Solana
 
-Is a very scalable blockchain in the DePIN space, Project Mycelium will launch its tokens in this ecosystem.
+Solana is a very scalable and important blockchain in the DePIN space. Project Mycelium will launch its tokens in this ecosystem to allow for a large audience to learn about Project Mycelium and participate within the ecosystem.
+
+We will provide more information on the project launch.
 
 

collections/projectmycelium/tokens/tokenomics.md

@@ -1,3 +1,9 @@
-> TODO
+# Tokenomics
 
-we love how https://flare.network/tokenomics-flr-updated/ did it
+This section will be expanded as we develop the Project Mycelium tokenomics.
+
+For now, we provide the template for the Hero tokens and keys.
+
+## Inspiration
+
+We love how [Flare Network](https://flare.network/tokenomics-flr-updated/) developed a tokenomics aimed at the community and collaboration. We will draw inspiration from their work.

collections/projectmycelium/tokens/tokens.md

@@ -1,14 +1,20 @@
-# Tokens
+# Hero Tokens and Keys
 
-- HERO TOKEN = 
+## Hero Token
-  - our digital currency
+
-  - there will be X,000,000,000 HERO
+The HERO token is our digital currency. There will be a given amount of Hero tokens (X,000,000,000 HERO tokens). This will be determined in the near future.
-  - the large majority of the HERO will be to reward community expansion (technology and reach)
+
-- HERO KEY =
+The large majority of HERO tokens will be to reward community expansion (technology and reach).
-  - your autonomous sovereign digital self, with a slot for a unique name
+
-  - can be connected to a legal entity (company) in a digital freezone.
+## Hero Key
-  - Your HERO KEY is unique and has unique properties like nr of names slots linked to it, capacity of storage, bandwidth, ..., possible locations for hosting, capabilities, ...
+
-  - We can buy and re-sell our key, the KEY once deployed is always personal and linked to our Identity, if we sell the KEY, then our personallity gets disconnected.
+The Hero key is a crucial part of the Hero journey.
+
+The Hero key is your autonomous sovereign digital self, with a slot for a unique name. It can be connected to a legal entity (i.e. a company) in a digital freezone.
+
+Your Hero key is unique and has unique properties like the numbers of names slots linked to it, the capacity of storage, compute, bandwidth, possible locations for hosting, capabilities, and much more.
+
+We can buy and re-sell our key, the Hero key, once deployed, is always personal and linked to our Identity. If we sell the Hero key, then our personallity gets disconnected.
 
 
 

collections/tfgrid4/boxes/cloudblock.md

@@ -9,14 +9,14 @@ There are unlimited different configurations of cloudblock.
 
 A configuration of a machine defines the cloudblock which can be made.
 
-cloudblock can be aggregated to make a bigger cloudblock.
+A cloudblock can be aggregated to make a bigger cloudblock.
 
 The default cloudblock has 
 
 - 4GB memory
 - 2 virtual cores of CPU
-- minimal 50 GB of fast storage (can be more, as to be defined by provider)
+- Minimal 50 GB of fast storage (can be more, as to be defined by provider)
-- minimal availability of 1 mbit/s bandwidth at all times
+- Minimal availability of 1 mbit/s bandwidth at all times
 
 Terms
 
@@ -31,11 +31,11 @@ Terms
   - 120 GB of SSD capacity
   - 6.4 logical CPU core (oversubscription of 4, which means user can max use 4x CPU capacity if system allows)
 - when a user choses the full machine, then he/she will have reserved all Storage Blocks capacity which means the machine is now dedicated reserved for the user, the hoster specifies the discount for this typically 50%. On a dedicated machine the user has full access to the GPU.
-- min 2GB always needs to be left as buffer for memory and 10% of SSD capacity
+- Min 2GB always needs to be left as buffer for memory and 10% of SSD capacity
 
 How does it work:
 
-- When a developer wants to deploy a virtual machine, he/she needs to define the required capacity and will be able to make a choice based on these CloudBlocks, each CloudBlock has different base specs (mem, ssd, gpu, cpu) and reputation, the developer can now make a selection of how many of these Storage Blocks need to be given to the virtual machine. This defines the monthly price which will have to be paid as well as capacity available to the VM.
+- When a developer wants to deploy a virtual machine, they need to define the required capacity and will be able to make a choice based on these CloudBlocks, each CloudBlock has different base specs (mem, ssd, gpu, cpu) and reputation, the developer can now make a selection of how many of these Storage Blocks need to be given to the virtual machine. This defines the monthly price which will have to be paid as well as capacity available to the VM.
 
 ## Cloud Hour (CH)