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tone_of_voice_review.md

@@ -15,8 +15,8 @@ The current language often uses strong, technical, or abstract terms that might
         *   **Suggestion:** Change to "Working Together" or "Our Collective Effort"
     *   **Original:** `Reclaim Your <span className="text-blue-600">Digital Life</span>. Build a New Internet <span className="text-green-600">Together</span>.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Take Charge of Your Digital Life. Create a Better Internet Together."
-    *   **Original:** `Join OurWorld Coop, a growing movement of people helping each other live, learn, and thrive in the digital age. Here, human connection matters. Your data is yours. Your voice counts. Together, we’re building a new kind of internet, one that’s free, fair, and made for us all.`
-        *   **Suggestion:** "Join OurWorld Coop, where people help each other live, learn, and thrive online. We focus on human connection. Your data is yours. Your voice matters. Together, we're shaping an internet that's free, fair, and works for everyone."
+    *   **Original:** `Join ThreeFold Galaxy Coop, a growing movement of people helping each other live, learn, and thrive in the digital age. Here, human connection matters. Your data is yours. Your voice counts. Together, we’re building a new kind of internet, one that’s free, fair, and made for us all.`
+        *   **Suggestion:** "Join ThreeFold Galaxy Coop, where people help each other live, learn, and thrive online. We focus on human connection. Your data is yours. Your voice matters. Together, we're shaping an internet that's free, fair, and works for everyone."
     *   **Original:** `Join people who are taking control of their digital lives.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Join people who are managing their digital lives with purpose."
 
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ The current language often uses strong, technical, or abstract terms that might
 *   **Digital Freezone Teaser:**
     *   **Original:** `More Than Technology: A Sovereign Digital Freezone`
         *   **Suggestion:** "More Than Technology: A Protected Digital Space"
-    *   **Original:** `OurWorld Coop operates within a sovereign digital freezone with its own governance, dispute resolution, and legal framework, ensuring true digital independence for our members.`
-        *   **Suggestion:** "OurWorld Coop operates within a protected digital space with its own rules, ways to resolve disagreements, and legal structure, giving our members real digital freedom."
+    *   **Original:** `ThreeFold Galaxy Coop operates within a sovereign digital freezone with its own governance, dispute resolution, and legal framework, ensuring true digital independence for our members.`
+        *   **Suggestion:** "ThreeFold Galaxy Coop operates within a protected digital space with its own rules, ways to resolve disagreements, and legal structure, giving our members real digital freedom."
 
-*   **OurWorld Section: A New Way to Live Digitally:**
+*   **ThreeFold Galaxy Section: A New Way to Live Digitally:**
     *   **Original:** `A Complete Sovereign Solution`
         *   **Suggestion:** "A Comprehensive Approach to Digital Life"
     *   **Original:** `Your HERO is an advanced personal digital assistant, powered by your own legal entity in a Freezone. It manages your digital life and helps you grow through trusted connections and shared knowledge. Together, we are united in a cooperative structure.`
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ The current language often uses strong, technical, or abstract terms that might
     *   **Original:** `The revolution starts with your first click.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Your journey begins with a click."
 
-### `src/components/OurWorldHero.jsx`
+### `src/components/ThreeFold GalaxyHero.jsx`
 
 *   **Hero Section:**
     *   **Original:** `It represents you, protects your data, and helps you learn and thrive. Powered by collective intelligence, shaped by your values, and fully under your control.`
@@ -103,12 +103,12 @@ The current language often uses strong, technical, or abstract terms that might
         *   **Suggestion:** "Meanwhile, artificial intelligence could become controlled by a few, or not helpful to those who need it most."
     *   **Original:** `Instead of pursuing Artificial General Intelligence (AGI), a machine-first simulation of human cognition, we build Augmented Collective Intelligence (ACI). Intelligence that scales with people, not against them.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Instead of focusing on AI that tries to think like humans, we're building a system that helps people think better together. This intelligence grows with us, supporting our efforts."
-    *   **Original:** `OurWorld COOP brings the ACI philosophy to life, a planetary-scale intelligence system for learning, healing, creativity, and human development. It is rooted in each person's context, culture, and journey.`
-        *   **Suggestion:** "OurWorld COOP puts this idea into practice, creating a system that helps people worldwide learn, heal, create, and grow. It's built around each person's unique background and journey."
-    *   **Original:** `Through your HERO, you interact with OurWorld COOP not as a user, but as a co-creator of collective wisdom.`
+    *   **Original:** `ThreeFold Galaxy COOP brings the ACI philosophy to life, a planetary-scale intelligence system for learning, healing, creativity, and human development. It is rooted in each person's context, culture, and journey.`
+        *   **Suggestion:** "ThreeFold Galaxy COOP puts this idea into practice, creating a system that helps people worldwide learn, heal, create, and grow. It's built around each person's unique background and journey."
+    *   **Original:** `Through your HERO, you interact with ThreeFold Galaxy COOP not as a user, but as a co-creator of collective wisdom.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Through your HERO, you contribute to and benefit from our shared knowledge, rather than just being a user."
 
-*   **What is OurWorld COOP and HERO:**
+*   **What is ThreeFold Galaxy COOP and HERO:**
     *   **Original:** `WHAT CAN OUR HERO DO?`
         *   **Suggestion:** "What Your HERO Can Do"
     *   **Original:** `Your HERO is more than just a chatbot, it's your trusted private ally in the digital world.`
@@ -161,8 +161,8 @@ The current language often uses strong, technical, or abstract terms that might
 *   **Call to Action:**
     *   **Original:** `Ready to Meet Your HERO?`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Discover Your HERO"
-    *   **Original:** `Join OurWorld Coop and get your personal HERO - a digital assistant that truly serves you, operating from within our sovereign digital freezone where your interests come first.`
-        *   **Suggestion:** "Join OurWorld Coop and get your personal HERO - a digital assistant that supports you, operating from within our secure digital space where your interests are prioritized."
+    *   **Original:** `Join ThreeFold Galaxy Coop and get your personal HERO - a digital assistant that truly serves you, operating from within our sovereign digital freezone where your interests come first.`
+        *   **Suggestion:** "Join ThreeFold Galaxy Coop and get your personal HERO - a digital assistant that supports you, operating from within our secure digital space where your interests are prioritized."
     *   **Original:** `Your HERO awaits in our sovereign digital territory.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "Your HERO awaits in our secure digital space."
 
@@ -303,8 +303,8 @@ The current language often uses strong, technical, or abstract terms that might
 ### `src/components/BecomeMember.jsx`
 
 *   **Hero Section:**
-    *   **Original:** `Join OurWorld Coop's sovereign digital freezone for $20 USD per month.`
-        *   **Suggestion:** "Join OurWorld Coop's protected digital space for $20 USD per month."
+    *   **Original:** `Join ThreeFold Galaxy Coop's sovereign digital freezone for $20 USD per month.`
+        *   **Suggestion:** "Join ThreeFold Galaxy Coop's protected digital space for $20 USD per month."
     *   **Original:** `This will be your unique identifier (e.g., firstpart.secondpart). Each part must be 7 lowercase letters.`
         *   **Suggestion:** "This will be your unique identifier (e.g., firstpart.secondpart). Each part must be at least 6 lowercase letters." (This was already changed in code, but the description needs to be updated in the markdown.)